Tick tock
I yawn
Tick tock goes the clock
And begin to cont sheep
Tick tock goes the clock
Then my eyes fliker
Tick tock goes the clock
I am asleep
Tick tock goes the clock
Then I am up
Tick tock goes the clock
I forgot to brush my teeth
Tick tock goes the clock
I fall back asleep
Tick tock goes the clock
After conting sheep
Tick tock goes the clock!
Image by Robbie howell.










February 11th, 2010 at 8:50 am
Hi rosa I love this poem it really made me think about tic toc so thanks for the cool comment
February 12th, 2010 at 12:05 pm
Hi Rosa,
I really like the flow and ryhm in your poem. I feel like I’m watching the clock waiting to fall asleep and than watching for the sun to come up.
Please keep your words coming.
Mr. Laurie
February 18th, 2010 at 4:03 pm
Hi Rosa,
We find that your writing style really intriguing
Your poem was nice and we enjoyed reading it
_-*-_PEACE_-*-_
March 18th, 2010 at 10:09 am
That is so cute I have a question whats your favorite thing to do in your free time oh and what kinds of animals do you guys have over where you live oh and am really in to skateboarding i also like to hang out with all my friends.
March 18th, 2010 at 10:10 am
hey your a really good writer do you like to write a lot?
March 18th, 2010 at 10:12 am
I really liked your poem you should keep on writing this really good poems.
March 18th, 2010 at 10:15 am
I really like your poem and I think its really really good poem keep on going,
Lol.
March 19th, 2010 at 9:03 am
Ya,I love to write poems.
March 19th, 2010 at 9:09 am
My favorite thing to do in my free time is horse back ride,Ware I live their are some people horses and dogs abnd cats are common house pets.
March 25th, 2010 at 9:04 am
Hi, I’m Tulsi from California! This is a great poem, and I wish I was this great with poems!